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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:58浏览次数:3950
要求:

The table below gives information about the difference between life expectancy and infant morality. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the difference between life expectancy and infant morality

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章层次较为清晰;请作者增加词汇丰富度,增加学术词汇的使用,改正文中拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

It was shown in the Figure that life expectancy in 1960 was lower than 40 years old while that in 1990 was approaching 60 years old and on the other hand, the infant mortality in 1960 was about 19% and that in 1990 is 9%. Longer life expectancy and lower infant mortality in 1990 than in 1960 are clearly indicated. During the 30 years between 1960 and 1990, the living condition and medical scienses had changed dramatically. Many diseases that could not be cured in 1960 could be treated in 1990. The mothers can receive better health care and nutritional conditions when they give birth to the infants in 1990 than 1960. It is expected that as the science developes and the living condition goes better the life expectancy would be even longer and the infant mortality lower and lower.

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