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句式变化较丰富，但文中有句子错误；词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，文中有些单词拼错了；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
nowadays it is common for young people to look for jobs when they finish school . so there is belief that everyone should have career plan when they step out of school .. i think this arguments is true to some extent. i think various reasons may lead to get a decent job and have a bright future.to start with,we should persuade p not to think highly of themselves when actual ability. on top of this ,p should learn to how to highly sociable and attach greater importance to themselves.furthermore,u should wear formal clothes on inview to be polite since people have more choices for clothes han 10 years ago to sume up,i believe with the joint efforts from individuals and enterprise , it can be evtntally have a good result. thit is to say who the person is , or what the reason is ,anyone could be successful at the end if he work on it
