拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
As an English monitor,recently I find that some students lose the confidence to learn English language. So I really want to discuss about the topic how to stay the interest of learning English. First let us get learn about the importance about learning English. There are two points. The first one is that today the world is the international world, more and more people want to communicate with each others without any language barriers. English is an universal language. No matter the people from which country they should learn English such as Janpanese, Korean and other non-English countries. The second point is that we can learn the best part of the western culture and then improve ourselves. We can share and understand the different culture. And then let us see how to improve the score and level of English.There are at least three ways. The first is that we should read more and more articles and English books which have adequate words and vocabularies.The second way is that we should practice oral English among the students. Perodically hold the English corner to discuss the interesting topics.The third way is that let the students be the English teacher to see which part is our weakness and which should be increase more. Anyway above the suggestions is from my opinion. I really hope we can improve a lot about English in the near future.