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湖南怀化市2012-2013年高二上学期期末试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:04浏览次数:3165
要求:
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是一名英语课代表,发现部分同学对英语学习失去了信心。请你写一篇词数不少于100字的英语短文来鼓励他们,唤起其对学习英语的兴趣。
写作要点:
1、学习英语的重要性。
2、提高英语成绩的措施(至少3点)。
用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

As an English monitor,recently I find that some students lose the confidence to learn English language. So I really want to discuss about the topic how to stay the interest of learning English. First let us get learn about the importance about learning English. There are two points. The first one is that today the world is the international world, more and more people want to communicate with each others without any language barriers. English is an universal language. No matter the people from which country they should learn English such as Janpanese, Korean and other non-English countries. The second point is that we can learn the best part of the western culture and then improve ourselves. We can share and understand the different culture. And then let us see how to improve the score and level of English.There are at least three ways. The first is that we should read more and more articles and English books which have adequate words and vocabularies.The second way is that we should practice oral English among the students. Perodically hold the English corner to discuss the interesting topics.The third way is that let the students be the English teacher to see which part is our weakness and which should be increase more. Anyway above the suggestions is from my opinion. I really hope we can improve a lot about English in the near future.

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