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简单句有点多，从句数量使用不足；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
How to improve school safety It is important that a lot of campus of the thing.As long as people contalation a little love our would become more and more beautiful. Nothimg is impossible to a willing heart. Firstly, the made me that feel very amazing. Everybody in touch with strong think. Secondly we should make a number of way. Only can you these way our school become more and more beautiful. The security guard is ours' god.But, we should help others.because,we live in the common family.A numble of stuldent have flash way .As far,they alines the question and solve it. Hope everybody come true ,this ia my way.
