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学术词汇能比较准确的使用，不过拼写错误稍多；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
The Impact of Information Explosion It is well-known to us that more and more various information occupy our daily life.The promble of the information explosion has been brought into focus. In my opinion,the large amout informations do not mean that you can acquire all information you want. It is evident that there are some informations are unnessaury.If we adopt all sorts information without the discreet choosing, we are likely to be distracted by irrelevant information and make the wrong decision. There is no doubt that we are not able to avoid all irrelevent informations. However, to some extends, we are capable to exculde some useless informations from our minds by the constantly inspecting and cautiously thinking. In a words,we should think again and again before we come to a conclusion.
