作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Dear John, Firstly,thank you for you invented me to your home.But for,i'm readying essential of the exam.I feel very sorry to you,please don't mind.I hope you can got it.Secondly,this is all my accuse.Advise, god don't assist me,no way.I Will get a surprise to you to you can lucky.I trust the change will come as soon as.please allow me to say sorry again.As me,you will spend a lot ot time in you party,i feel exceedingly pleasant.Have a good time.only can you feel happy you world will become more and more beautiful. Best wish to you. Your close friend Li Hua