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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:58浏览次数:3953[网页划词已开启]
要求:

The table below gives information about the difference between life expectancy and infant morality. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the difference between life expectancy and infant morality

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分65.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句子错误偏多,建议修改;文中用词稍显贫乏,请多使用学术词汇;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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  Sometimes HMW DNA could not be efficiently digested by Hind III enzyme for the recovery of 100-300 kb DNA segments, which was probably caused by the following reasons: firstly, the histones in the chromosomes were not completely digested, the Hind III enzyme could access DNA to cut it, to solve this problem, we should prolong the digestion time to 15 min or add the concentration of proteinase K to 0.5 mg/ml; secondly, proteinase K was not completely inactivated by PMSF, thus proteinase K could inactivate Hind III enzyme, at this situation, the plugs should be washed time after time by TE solution containing PMSF; thirdly, the rudimental PMSF also could inactivate Hind III, so the plug should be adequately washed by TE solution without PMSF following the washing with TE solution containing PMSF.

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