文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
It is known well that English language is widely in the world.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.As your English represent,i feel very pleasant.That you missed such an interesting English is a pity.Firstly,it is important for everybody to learn english well and never give it up.Secondly, a few students find learn it is hard.So,i hope the student can finish homework on time.Thirdly,all students should make up your mind learn english weel.Only can you these way i truest you can make along you future.A full into the pit a gain in your wit.I hope everybody find yourself confident.Even if you have a faw mistake,don't mind you can turn to teacher or classmate for help.Best wish to you.