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nowadays,shopping on line become more and more popular,however,there are some advantages and some disadvantages.so let us talk about it. to begin with,shopping on line can decrease many matters.we can buy things at home instead of going to stores,in addition ,the things bought on line are much cheaper than that in stores ,however,some goods sold on line have problem with quality.and we just see its appearance,so maybe there are some problems. in my view.we should regard online shopping as a hobby,and buy some suitable things on it .only in this way can we use it better.