2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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my friend will be china ,I arragment her schedule to visit my hometown also chairmen mao's hometown -xiangtan. chairmen mao's hometown is most famous tourist in hunan province.where it is five star tourist and it is the culture and history heritage .they have three 30 million's people. chairmen mao is our first president of the pepole republic of china