Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.
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These days, the proportion of children who are addicted to TV programs are increasing rapidly, which has risen a heated discussion among people. There is no doubt that watching TV really does bad to youth in some aspects. To be specific, first,spending too long time sitting before TV may cause some problems such as obesity and short sight. Second, there are many unhealthy programs on TV, especially those violence and pornography, imposing negative impact on children’s mental development. In addition, for those young students, being addicted to TV means less communication with theirs parents and friends, they just live in their virtual world, no mention to study hard and get a satisfying result in the exam. However, watching TV can also have some benefits. To begin with, it helps to broaden their eyes by watching some exploration and scientific programs, for example, without traveling abroad, children are able to learn foreign cultures and customs. What’s more, it really plays a vital role for entertainment of those students, some TV shows are of great interest, which can remove children from their study pressure for a while, they will be prepared for the next hard last after getting refreshed. Last but not least, it can be an important moment for children to communicate with their parents and their classmates while watching TV together, which leads a better understanding for each other. So, in a nutshell, TV programs really have some negative effects, but if we handle them on properly, we can eventually minimum it and even make it a valuable tool for both physical and mental development of students.