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2013年2月2日雅思大作文真题TASK2

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要求:

Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion. 

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参考过去出现的相关题目可以帮助同学们更好地解题:
2008.01.10 TV/ video/ computer games: Good or bad
2008.05.10 Children watch tv: at home VS school
2009.05.16 Imagination and language skills: Read books Vs watch TV
2013.01.05 2009.05.16
2010.03.27 children more Tv, less activities, why? measures?
2010.09.25 Too much TV for children, How affect? What measures?
2010.11.04 Parents read for children Vs free choice on TV/internet/books
2007.12.15 Disasters & violence on TV: why, effects?
2007.11.17 Ads aimed at children should be banned?
第一段:看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动,有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾
第二段:看电视太多的消极面
1对身体健康不利
2 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流
3 对智力发展不利
4 有些电视内容不适合小孩子
第三段:适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展
1 增加知识,和探索世界的兴趣
2 丰富课余生活
3 和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动
第四段:适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目,并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展,否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。
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评语:

作者词汇基本功很好,学术词汇表达也比较恰当;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

These days, the proportion of children who are addicted to TV programs are increasing rapidly, which has risen a heated discussion among people. There is no doubt that watching TV really does bad to youth in some aspects. To be specific, first,spending too long time sitting before TV may cause some problems such as obesity and short sight. Second, there are many unhealthy programs on TV, especially those violence and pornography, imposing negative impact on children’s mental development. In addition, for those young students, being addicted to TV means less communication with theirs parents and friends, they just live in their virtual world, no mention to study hard and get a satisfying result in the exam. However, watching TV can also have some benefits. To begin with, it helps to broaden their eyes by watching some exploration and scientific programs, for example, without traveling abroad, children are able to learn foreign cultures and customs. What’s more, it really plays a vital role for entertainment of those students, some TV shows are of great interest, which can remove children from their study pressure for a while, they will be prepared for the next hard last after getting refreshed. Last but not least, it can be an important moment for children to communicate with their parents and their classmates while watching TV together, which leads a better understanding for each other. So, in a nutshell, TV programs really have some negative effects, but if we handle them on properly, we can eventually minimum it and even make it a valuable tool for both physical and mental development of students.

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