文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
I have a good friend. She is an beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and red mouth. Her voice is better. she is beautiful at singing. She is an clever girl. She likes read books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much.