拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
In my opinions, I thinks TV has both good thing and bad thing. As we know, nowadays the information was run the world every second. We should fact different challenge day by day.Thanks for TV's help, making us know more different information of different country. Also, TV has many funny programs, making us happy and relax ourselves. As well as we can learn some new thing such as history, language and so on by watching TV. But the second places, watching TV also will bring some problems to effect our daily lives. If we focus on the TV problem, which will effect our academic. If we addicted to watch TV, making our vision worse and worse. So that in order to protect ourselves, we should appropriate to watch TV.