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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(74):课外活动

发布时间:2015-01-29 14:54浏览次数:621
要求:
你校课外活动小组将举行一次英语讨论会,讨论关于学生看电视的问题。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,谈谈你的看法,如看电视获取信息便捷,可以了解世界、学习知识,但看多了影响视力,耽误学习等。
词数:100左右;
开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention,please?
用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

In my opinions, I thinks TV has both good thing and bad thing. As we know, nowadays the information was run the world every second. We should fact different challenge day by day.Thanks for TV's help, making us know more different information of different country. Also, TV has many funny programs, making us happy and relax ourselves. As well as we can learn some new thing such as history, language and so on by watching TV. But the second places, watching TV also will bring some problems to effect our daily lives. If we focus on the TV problem, which will effect our academic. If we addicted to watch TV, making our vision worse and worse. So that in order to protect ourselves, we should appropriate to watch TV.

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