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Boys and girls, May I have your attention,please?I’m going to talk something about students watching TV. As we know,TV plays an important part in our daily life.It’s quicker and more convenient to get information from TV than from newspapers.Providing us with lively and interesting moving pictures,TV enables us not only to see what is happening in the world but also to learn many things,including foreign languages.So it is not reasonable to forbid students to watch TV.But watching TV too long is not good.Sitting in front of TV all day does harm to our eyes and wastes our time for study. So we should take a correct attitude to students’ watching TV. Thank you for your listening.