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on my way to school i saw an old man with his cure grandson who seems to be like 10 years old . the old man is tall and thin holding a bag and volin . i stand upo immediately and want the noice and lindly man to have a seat .although the boy sat down and shou to the old man to give him a drink.the poor old man as his request to do it..the boy grink up and throw away the beveagebottle .to conclusion,i am convined that boy should respect the old people and take are of hom and keeeep the clean
