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希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查；可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意文中的几处句子错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
in contemporary society,it is commn for young people to follow some fashion trends in watching the match with classmates .so there is brief that we are very happy to watch a game between the china and usa .in my childhood i often wach it on tv.now i can visit the site such a excited for me.there are numerous reasons why i support ths game , i would explore a foe of the most important ones .c carry the footabll and win at tyhe end after a while ,whey are excited to see the ending . i amconvinced our countey will win it is nature for p to see itin a commmericalised society
