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nowadays it is common for young p to surf the intetnrt. so there is a brieg that it is bad for p to do it. i think this arguments iss true to some extent. there are numerous reasons why i support ths opinion.i wouls explore a few of the most important ones here.to start with,mike get accited to play compuers games.although there are many funny hings in it.it dose great harm to our health ,expecially the eyes.i can,t deny the felling of happiness whenu playing the computerr games .it seems to walk in the beautiful mountain and enjoy the reshh air at the smke times ,can kisten the birdes singing. u can attend the activities run by our school and get interested in studying.u may find have many interesting thngs in theactivities u can shate with me and they willl kept in u menory .
