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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4837
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

As a famous saying goes,"Happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them."And it is the truth that nowadays more and more people feel they are not happy in their lives. Admittedly,the main fact is that they do not realize the real meaning of happiness,so almost all of them think that happiness is a wonderfui life without any trouble.How can you imagine a life without any obstacle?Through our whole lives,there can be a lot of problems concerned many parts,such as relationship,money and so on.But if we can copy with these obstacles well,our future can be brighter than what it was before after these tests,for you may be know how different to gain happiness. All in all,happiness is the ability to deal with problems,not a life which has not troubles.Try your best to gain happiness and then cherish it all the time。

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