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with the rapid development of economy ,cars show a significant increase in many countries as far as i am concerned ,cars benefits the economic growth and society to some extent,but its negative influence should be noticed. on the one hand,cars brings huge benegits to mankind. however,it is early to come to the conclusion that car is the best.every possiblesolutions should be tried. to start with,p shoul d obey the traffic rules and don,t lay on the street.don,t drive when u drank the beer . if all the people put their heart into it ,our life is becoming better and better
