2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦88:聚会

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there is no doubt that u are clever and handsome to find my house. i will notea meassage for u to easy find my dream home.iy will provide u many kinds of ways to reach u goal.u can walk to my house because it is good for u health.u should turn left when u get our from u home and go along this street , u will found the traffic lights ,cross the bridge.turn right at the frist cornerand u will see jbuilding.i live inroon 505