2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦88:聚会

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It’s easy to walk from your home to mine. Turn left out of your home. Walk straight along the street, you will see the traffic lights. Walk across the bridge and take the first turning on your right. ( and turn right at the first crossing) Then you will see Hongqiao Building. I live in Flat 506.