4. 他工作认真,我们都喜欢他的课,他是我们的偶像。
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my new teacher is science teacher.he is vey stro0ng. he has big mouth twwobig eyes two bif ears. and not to small not too small noses . he often wears a black new skitrs and blown pants ,with two big shoes.he is b=very kind ,and he is very smar.she likes books ,play games and chess .He likes listening to music and sports, often play basketball with us on Friday afternoon; 4. He works hard, we all like his classes, he is our idol.she is also nice . she often help us.