2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错；从句偏少，建议平时练习中加大单词的记忆；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

Nowadays,people are addicted in the their cells phones. They are looking at their cell phones everywhere even crossing the street.They ignore the comunications face to face.Instead,they are willing to get connected with others in the unreal word. As the cell phones' overuse,the relations among the people are more and more instant.People fail to get moved or feel regards from parents,friends or lovers.The word we live in are becoming indifferent.