托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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Firstly,I disagree with the statement that Snap judgment can never be trusted. It seems that lots of bad idea developed from the snap judgment ,for example ,a impulse shopping .This kind of behavior would cost you bunch of money to buy things that you did not need. But if you have a good shopping plan you can avoid that happened to you. Snap judgments always come out from a slight thinking ,a flash light sparking in brain. These ideas usually not bad, let recall the Newton's story. If the apple hadn't drop on his head give him the idea of gravity to develop the theory of Newton's law ,our scientific level would still stay in the 19 centry's .