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【题目要求】
Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.
【写作分析】
第一段：看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动，有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾
第二段：看电视太多的消极面
1对身体健康不利
2 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流
3 对智力发展不利
4 有些电视内容不适合小孩子
第三段：适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展
1 增加知识，和探索世界的兴趣
2 丰富课余生活
3 和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动
第四段：适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目，并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展，否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。
作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；熟练使用了一些长难句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
These days, the proportion of children who are addicted to TV programs are increasing rapidly, which has risen a heated discussion among people. There is no doubt that watching TV really does bad to youth in some aspects. To be specific, first, children sitting in front of TV tend to have poor eyesight and weak body due to lack of physical exercise. Second, there are many unhealthy programs on TV, especially those violence and pornography, imposing an negative impact on those immature people who are prone to be influenced. In addition, another concern is about their mental development which needs various types of interactive activities, but obviously excessive TV viewing means less communication with theirs parents as well as peers, they are just lost in virtual world and insensitive to people around them, no mention to study hard and get a satisfying result in the exam. However, watching TV in moderation with proper parental supervision can be good for children . To begin with, it helps to expand children’s knowledge and spark their interest exploring the world by watching some exploration and scientific programs, for example, without traveling abroad, children are able to learn foreign cultures and customs. What’s more, it really plays a vital role for entertainment for those students, some TV shows are indeed of great interest, which can relief children from their study pressure and have a rest for both physical and mental aspects, in which they can get prepared for the next hard task. Last but not least, it can be an important moment for children to communicate with their parents and their classmates while watching TV together, which leads a better understanding for each other. So, in a nutshell, I’d like to conclude whether TV is good or bad is mainly determined by how parents manage it. If parents limit TV hours and designate some educational and interesting programs and they keep their children accompanied, healthy viewing habit would be established and positive effect will be maximized. Otherwise, watching TV can be a worrying situation.
