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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
As we know, the internet is becoming more and more essential in every aspects of our life. We can say that, we seem to no longer separate with it, for it has faciliated us greatly. Among it influence, its impact on education shouldn't be ignored. It has imposed revolution on education not only in teaching method for teachers but also give convenience to students to learn. First, as for the teaching method, teachers can use the internet to record his lectures,and then upload them to the internet, so students from anywhere can have access to it. It helps to make knowledge spread more quickly and widely. Second, teachers can share their teaching materials and methods with each other even though they don't know each other. They can chat online on clubs or chatting apps. Third, for students, though they can't go abroad to study in top universities, they can use the internet to watching lectures from famous universities classes. For example, the net ease class provides such convenience. This favors thousands of students all over the world. Forth, likewise, students can communicate online to learn from each other. All in all, the internet has bring many advantages to education. In the future, I believe, it will exert more changes to education.
