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Last week,we made an interview for a psychology expert about how to share our feeling to each other of china students.Through this task ,we can conclude that over 30 percentage students didn't want to share their emotion whatever happiness or sorrow.Unfortunately,our education didn't make our children to know the importance of sharing.Kelly lam ,who is an famous psychology expert said that it is very necessarily learn to share the emotion to someone when we born in this time .Meanwhile,to share our feeling is playing an important role in the way of our growth.
