2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(71):带手机上学

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Dear principle, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether a mobile phone should be brought to school.The results are as follows. 70% of the students hold the view that it is unnecessary to carry mobile phones.On the one hand,bringing mobile phones is supposed to affect students in focusing on the study.On the other hand,students will bring economic burdens to their parents by using mobile phones.However,the rest students argue that there is no problem that students go to school with mobile phones.Certainly,on the condition that having their phones turned off.They are convinced that, as times goes,it is not wise to keep the students within a certain old discipline. Yours sincerely, Li Hua