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my favourite school should be defifitely my no ove chioce to introuuce.indded .our school like a botnical garden with lots of trees and flowers .i have many subjects to learn .in my spare time ,i i always attend schoal activities it can enhance my social skill it helps me kill the boring time .i can get on well with my clasmates .after class , i oftento go to the jum,it can make me have a body shape .most importantly,make me healthy . i can get totallu relaxed when i go to gyn to work out
