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my favourire place is library.it is very big . there are many rooms in it. there are many computers in it, i can watch tv cctv news and chat with my friends via the computer.u can fid it easily right in the center of my school.as to its features , i have to say it should be the most magmnificent liary i have ever seen,. the libry building has 6 floors .from the frist floor, there are different kinds of collections .if people want to borrow books ,they can go there.another major part is the multi media auditiorium.many important lectures are held in it.opposite to this auditorrm , thers is a coffee shop.oif people get tired and want to take a break , the coffee shop is really a nice place to go . i think the library is really a good one .owing to these advantages . a lots of people like to use it and benefit from its from its convenience and rich resourcs .
