可适当增加从句和复合句的使用;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
english is widely used in china . learning fefeign languages is extremely important .nowadays china needs a large number of p who can communicate with foreigners in many fields .it can offer many jobs when they look for.i perfer to learn it in active way . say, hanging out with foreigners and imitating they way they talk or imitating it from someone origninal english mivies .it is impoarant to master the grammar although it is complicated which is a long story to learn it . if us tudy hard on it and stick to it . u will have a bright future.when u tired ,u can relax youesely in the peaceful environment .when u feel tired or unhappy ,learning english is the best way to forget u allthe trouble.