作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
ENGLISH STUDY The English language has become an international language because it is used by people in most countries in the world now. If you want to do business with foreigners, you must speak English because most of them speak and write in English. First, English is one of the working languages at international meetings.People communicate in English in important meetings. Second, today, most of valuable books are written in English.If you know much English, you will read newspapers and maganizes in English and learn a lot of knowledge better. Third, with the help of English, you can also do what you should do for the world peace.English was widely used in both the Olympics held in Beijing and the Expo in Shanghai. English is very important to us, but many students don’t know why we should learn it. I hope that all the students should pay more attention to English study and use English freely.