2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦27:What makes me a good friend?

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i have a good friend whose name is lily from usa. she is extremely pretty that cant use language it.she has long yellow hair ,two big blue eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better due to she is goot at singing in different language .u can see hoe smart she is .she likes reading books expecially chinesebecause she think it provide her with knowledge ,help her learn a lot about what is happening around the world .sometimes, we read books together .we all think it is the best way to forget all the triubles.she like playing computers and chess.in addition,she is so nice to s contribute to we all like her.i hope our friendship will lats a long tme