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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦28:Weekend Activities

发布时间:2014-07-29 17:32浏览次数:526
要求:
想想你和你的同学是如何度过周末的? 以“Weekend Activities”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你们的周末活动。
要求:
1.语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整;
2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名;
3.词数:80左右;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。

5.在写作时,可用上下列提示词语:study at home, play sports, play computer games(玩电脑游戏), surf the Internet (上网), hang out(闲逛), go shopping(去购物)。


Weekend Activities
In my class,most of my classmates have colorful weekends.
用户的作文(系统评分56.5分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

our friends and i went to the library this weekend.it is our fribure place which decorated with twinling lights .it is big and bright. there are many kinds of books .newspapers ,magazines. we lke reading newspapers and books there become they not only provide me with knowledge ,buy also help me learn a lot about what is happening in the world . sometimes , i even feel i can have atalk with the people in the books . i can also relax mysely in the oeaceful environment.what i feel tired or unhappy , the reading room is the best place to go to.' reading help me forgot all the troubles,for me,the reading room is the place i like best

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