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i perfer to eat at home .although it costs some time to make the preparation and do the washing up.u needn,t travel and and wait for your order.more importantly, it ismuch economical to eat at home . it is clean and safe so that u don,t worry about your bags were stolen when u put it on the chair but u go to the reception desk or washroom.in addation, it would be save u mavh money campared to eating out.finally ,u have a lot of choices to eat and convenience for u .it is enjoyment and recreation process .u can cook according to u taste .besides , it offers u a sense of achievement to ook delicious food
