2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦42:动物园

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i have got a kitty whose name is lily which is come o my home about 5 years ago .the pet adds much interest to my lige.when i stay at home alone , i do not feel lonely.i think keeping pets helps p develop a sense of responsibility nd become more considerate.for some lonely elderly person,pets are also good companions .