2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦42:动物园

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My Favourite Animal My favourite animal is pandas.They are nice and lovely.You can see them in many zoos in the world.They all come from China.They like eating bamboo and they can eat 15 kilos of bamboo a day.When we see them，they are always eating.Pandas are white and black and their eyes，ears and legs are black.They look very smart.Many people like them.Do you love pandas?