简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
there is no doubt that stress has bscome a huge problem.what factores lead to this phenomenon and what we can do to solve this problem have become a concern to many people. i think various reasons may lead this problem .to star with ,with the develop,emt of society pepele much more busier than before.such as job hunting ,entrace examition and so on .under lotsof pressure and no place no friend to let off lead to they have peychology problem. to tackle the problem of increasing poressure .every possible solution should be trie3d. to stary with, do more exercise can make u relaxedec to concreate on u work