2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

How should parents help children to be independent?This is a hot potato to most parents. Nowadays,children are given what they want.It is a unfavorable phenonmena.Parents often do most of things that should be done by children themselves.After a long period of this cause children can't do even an easy thing.What's more,the rich in quality gives children an ease environment which make them lose the ability to take care of themselves. In order to let children be independent,parents should try to make a relatively tough environment to cultivate children's characters.The most important is trying to change the mind of dependent on children's brain.