句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My friend's name is Yang mei.She is a beautiful girl and looks like her mother very much. She likes sports very much,and she is a good football player and basketball player.She is also very good at singing and swimming. I,my mother,father,brother,sister and my classmates like her intenly much. Last night,I and her has dinner together,she liked the food very much,and I feel very happy.