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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(73):My Teachers and Me

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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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I never forget my english teacher. I was been poor in my english when I was study it. I know, teacher was disappointing at me who was teaching to me english. I don't like english and never used it to told with each other until I met the new english teacher, miss Li, a 30 years old's teacher, when I went to high middle school. She told to me never give up when she knew my worried. And she said, when she was young, she also poor in english study, but she never abandon it. English had hurt her a thousand times, but she still regard it as her first love. Since that time, I began to learnt my english. Miss Li also will help me such as gave me some simple english paper or taught me some grammar after school. In addition to this, she usually encouraged me to used english to talk another. She said, if I want to improve my english, maybe useing it to talk with everyone is the best way. Nowadays, I not only not afraid english but also pass the english paper. Thanks for miss Li's help, I will never forgot her.

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