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4．周杰伦(Jay Chou)是我最喜欢的歌手，他是中国最受欢迎的歌手之一。
I love music
I love music because_____________________________________________________
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I love music very much because the music can bring the joy to people and make people feel happy. In different countries,people all like music.I think that if we don't have music,our life will be unfunny. The pop music is my favourite music.Because it sounds very good and make me feel relaxed. Jay Chou is my favourite singer and he is the most popular singers in China,too.
