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4．周杰伦(Jay Chou)是我最喜欢的歌手，他是中国最受欢迎的歌手之一。
I love music
I love music because_____________________________________________________
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I love music because it can bring me fun and make me happy when I’m sad. In different countries,people all love music very much. If there is no music in the world, our life won’t be so interesting. My favourite music is pop music. I think it sounds nice and it can make me feel relaxed. Jay Chou is my favourite singer. He is one of the most popular singers in China. Music is very important for us, isn’t it?
