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It is a really hard thing for human to choose one between protection of environment and increasing of economy, because when people suffer poverty they will sacrifice anything include diversity of species, while when society sustain prosperity people will realize how environment destoried. However, although there is no doubt that science and technology can help people to diminish pollution, which make wild animals and plants have more change to live, those extinct species will never revive which died out because of the negative effect of human activities.
