2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

复杂句采用很棒；作者词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇需继续加强，拼写检查要重视；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Nowadays we are all live in an era with the information explotion,so it is no deneying that the main topic in this world is about computer and man. Admittedly,the computer does have a lot of irreplaceable advantage for people.For example,we are able to use it to complete works,gain much information,surf the internet and so on.In the other word,our lives now can not be deprived of the computer,and if someone loses his computer,every part of living may be affected seriously.But a computer can also cause many problems.To some extents,the computer widens the distence between a person and another person,which makes people more indifferent ever than before and it really causes so many new diseases,especially among the young group.These phenomenons should be paid more attention by most people. All in all,the computer help the man a lot in many different parts,but we should use it appropriatly and then our lives can be nice.