2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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there is no doubt the quality of life is dreasing has become a huge problem.what factors lead to this phenomenon and what we can do to solve this problem have become a concern to many people . i think various reasons may lead to this problem.to start with ,without high quality of education,there would be no high quality of life to ensure a long term economic boom.on top of this,some countries in order to boost production and invesrment ,manufactures wil try to expand their production to meet it duo to rapid growth in demand , which in turn would to pollute the environment.furthermore,it is common for people who under great pressure even have no time to care about their health to tackle the problem of it ,every possible solution should be tried.to stary with,inddividualb countries can make envirobmental laws to restain people,s behavior.besides,goverment can support research .forexample ,they should encourage companines to develop vehicles that cause less pollurion.moreover,the g accelate the prosperity of the economy so that more job opportunities could be created.at the same time ,as for the the relevant rnterprise ,measures to reduce tye excessive workload and create healthy work style.advocated and popularise a kind of wholesome way of work not only brings a merry mood to the working staff.stll,a fklexible schedule is another position.working more hours in the office and some hours at home alloes for more time with th efamilyevery individual should also clearly know that achievement in career will never be the sole purpose of life ,and to work diligently is to creat a more wonderful life.