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Dear Zhou Tao,
You’re one of my favourite students. In my eyes, _______________________________________________________________________________运用了一些简单从句，但不是很熟练；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段。
u are beautiful gril .u have long blank air , two big eyes and a red mourh .u voice is beter .u are good at singing ,dancing and play basketball. u are clever and hard working students .u lke reading books and playing computer games . u also nice .u often help us when we in difficulties.i like u veru much .u like listening to music and sports .u easy to get along with other p. i amproud of her
