下面是大明写给他的朋友Tom的信,信中描述了他的烦恼。请你以他的朋友Tom的身份,给他写一封80词左右的回信,在信中指出他的问题并给他提出建议。信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者词汇表达不够丰富,另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
from my point of view , u can apologize to her .the majon reason is u take a fancy to her pemn but without her premission and used it .u can buy a new pen for her.in shop ,u can be provide pens with more fountain .if u saorry to her sincerity ,she will forgive u .besides