2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How should parents help children to be independent?This is a hot potato to most parents. Nowadays,children are given what they want.It is an unfavorable phenomena.Parents often do most of the things that should be done by children themselves.After a long period of this make children can't do even an easy thing.What's more,the rich in quality gives children an ease environment which make them lose the ability to take care of themselves. In order to let children be independent,parents should try to make a relatively tough environment to cultivate children's characters.The most important is trying to change the mind of dependent on children's brain.