中考考前作文集中训练附范文2:时间胶囊

作者能较灵活的使用词汇，可是单词拼写还需加强；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

after 20 years ,i will speaking french fluenctly.it is often side that french is rthe most beautiful languages in the world ,it sonds very beautiful. i will live in paris and speak with frenchmen in french.whta,s more,france is romatic country,and its culture is interesting to me. i will read lotds of book about france .ia m putsuit of love and beauty in life.i will have many chikldren tyey may hace a chace to knowing more me .thet can know what i were like wheni young